Friday, 5 August 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #4

Last week we left Nala lost in her hero's eyes...

Nala quickly looked away, blushing, causing him to smile. As he got close enough, he reached out his hand to her.
“I’m Sergeant Jason Taylor. Are you ok, Miss…?”
“Nala Garcia," she finally mumbled, tentatively reaching out to accept his strong hand. “I…I think I’m ok, I don’t know,” her large, dark blue eyes filling with tears, and her lower lip trembling with uncertainty.

(Don't forget this is pre-edited work in progress!!) 


  1. Apologies for the change in font, I'm not sure what happened, there.

  2. Aw, poor Nala. I think we've all been there when looking at a handsome guy in the eyes. :-)

  3. Oooh yes. Most definately. Dark brown eyes tend to be the worst, or baby blues. But they're so cliche.