Friday 9 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #7

As those who have been following my blog know, I've recently being posting Six Sentences from my latest WIP, an erotic romance. I've decided to post all erotic content on a different blog, The Naughty Pages of The Phoenix, so if you want to read more about Krissy and her handsome stranger, then by all means, follow the above link. On this blog, I shall return to Nala and Jason. Read on...

“Well, Nala Garcia,” Jason softly spoke as he gently pulled her closer to him and wrapped a warm blanket around her shoulders, “let’s go make sure you are ok.” He gently led her to the ambulance that had already arrived, as his deputy hauled her attacker to his feet and moved him out of Nala’s line of sight.
Jason sat Nala down on the step of the ambulance, and started to back away to give the paramedics room, when she whimpered, and reached out for him. Now that she accepted his comfort, she didn’t want him too far; he was her anchor. Without him, she was afraid this would all be revealed as a dream, and she’d return to being pressed against the wall, fearing for her safety. Jason swiftly returned to her side, grasping her small, trembling hands in his large, warm ones, surprising her by how soft they were.

9 comments:

  1. well seeing as the blog didn't want to keep my comment grumbles.

    I like this piece it shows how vunerable she feels and how much of n influence over her he is.

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  2. I like this six. The story was very descriptive and I felt the suspense there. Good Six!

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  3. Thanks :) I'm yet to look at the edits on it, but I'll be getting in to them in a few weeks. I really need to get back to this one...

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  4. Very sensual 6- and I agree- it shows a certain vulnerability on her behalf
    Dawne

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  5. Great six, very seductive and I can't wait to see what happens next.

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  6. Nice six! Lovely how she doesn't want him too far away, now that she's accepted his assistance.
    Amy Durham

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  7. Thanks everyone. I'm yet to go through the edits of it, and have neglected it for a while, but hoping to get back to it soon. Not easy with 2 other WIP's and reviews, but I'll get there :)

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  8. Lovely scene. I like that Nala doesn't say anything. She's got to still be in shock! But she makes her needs known. I like Jason's response too. Tells us a lot about him.

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  9. Thanks Sandy. I'm hoping that you'll get to know them both over the next few Sundays. Here's hoping, when I finally finish this and get it published, that it is as big a hit as it is in these snippets!

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